User contributions for Hani Mike Rae Selim
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A user with 414 edits. Account created on 5 September 2017.
19 February 2019
- 23:0923:09, 19 February 2019 diff hist +28 Talk:Conflict Resolution in Project Management →Feedback on Abstract:
- 23:0823:08, 19 February 2019 diff hist +432 N Talk:Conflict Resolution in Project Management Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Good. |- |'''Article purpose explanatio..."
- 23:0423:04, 19 February 2019 diff hist +78 Talk:Four types of dependency →Feedback on Abstract: current
- 23:0323:03, 19 February 2019 diff hist +432 N Talk:Four types of dependency Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Good. |- |'''Article purpose explanatio..."
- 23:0123:01, 19 February 2019 diff hist +613 N Talk:Due Diligence on Wind Farm Assets Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Good. |- |'''Article purpose explanatio..."
- 22:5522:55, 19 February 2019 diff hist +145 N Talk:Gantt chart and Scheduling techniques Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== There's some progress. However, I cannot give much feedback at this point as the abstract is incomplete (19-Feb-2019)."
- 22:5322:53, 19 February 2019 diff hist +92 N Talk:Process Planning and Cost Estimation Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== Cannot give feedback as the abstract is incomplete (19-Feb-2019)."
- 22:5122:51, 19 February 2019 diff hist +826 N Talk:Risk Log Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good, but can be much more coherent. There's a few grammatical errors. The abstract still needs to b..."
- 22:4522:45, 19 February 2019 diff hist +800 N Talk:Project Management in pharmaceutical industry Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Okay. You can use pharma to add context..."
- 22:4022:40, 19 February 2019 diff hist +513 N Talk:Product family master plan Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Good. |- |'''Article purpose explanatio..."
- 22:3422:34, 19 February 2019 diff hist +795 N Talk:Benefits of systems engineering Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text can be coherent. It seems that the abstract isn't finalized yet. This is fine, but make sure to not min..."
- 22:2622:26, 19 February 2019 diff hist +842 N Talk:Design Thinking Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is somewhat coherent, but can be improved. Missing punctuation. Also, I would recommend adding titles (..."
- 22:0722:07, 19 February 2019 diff hist +599 N Talk:Human behaviors in scheduling Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good, however there's a few grammatical mistakes (e.g. look at "The majority of schedules is created..."
- 20:2220:22, 19 February 2019 diff hist +530 N Talk:Project Management Success Factors Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== Great to see your'e ahead of the game! Please find my feedback below: {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good, however there's a few g..."
- 10:4910:49, 19 February 2019 diff hist +536 N Talk:Resource breakdown structure Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good, however it can be more coherent. Try reading the abstract again and add more punctuation whene..."
- 10:3810:38, 19 February 2019 diff hist +545 N Talk:Project Management Reporting Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Very good. It's also good to describe t..."
- 10:2810:28, 19 February 2019 diff hist +34 Talk:The Periodic Table of Project Management →Feedback on Abstract:
- 10:2810:28, 19 February 2019 diff hist +721 N Talk:The Periodic Table of Project Management Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent, however there's a few grammatical errors. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''..."
- 09:2309:23, 19 February 2019 diff hist +394 N Talk:Application of Agile Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent, however there's a few grammatical errors (missing space). |- |'''Description of the tool/t..."
- 09:1609:16, 19 February 2019 diff hist +453 N Talk:Improve communication with active listening Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good, however there's a few grammatical errors (e.g. writing "spent" instead of "spend.") |- |'''Des..." current
- 08:5908:59, 19 February 2019 diff hist +536 N Talk:Dan Pink on Motivation Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Good. |- |'''Article purpose explanatio..."
- 08:5308:53, 19 February 2019 diff hist +609 N Talk:Requirements management using SysML Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== The abstract seems incomplete. However, please find my immediate feedback below (19-Feb-2019) {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is okay,..."
- 08:2908:29, 19 February 2019 diff hist +651 N Talk:Effective Brainstorming Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is okay, however there's a few grammatical errors. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| G..."
- 08:2208:22, 19 February 2019 diff hist +166 N Talk:Cognitive Bias Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== Cannot give feedback at this point as the abstract is not complete, however feel free to reach out if you have any questions (19-Feb-2019)."
- 08:1808:18, 19 February 2019 diff hist +386 N Talk:Value to whom? Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Good. However, could you even scope the..."
18 February 2019
- 22:5922:59, 18 February 2019 diff hist +502 N Talk:Project Sponsorship Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good. However, it can be more concise and coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''..."
- 22:5222:52, 18 February 2019 diff hist +600 N Talk:Investment portfolio management Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good, however there's a few grammatical errors. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| G..."
- 22:4522:45, 18 February 2019 diff hist +464 N Talk:Unidentified Risks Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is okay, however the beginning needs to be more coherent. Consider using brackets less often. I would n..."
- 22:4022:40, 18 February 2019 diff hist +8 Talk:Basic estimation techniques →Feedback on Abstract:
- 22:3922:39, 18 February 2019 diff hist +452 N Talk:Basic estimation techniques Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is okay, however there's a few grammatical errors (e.g. "a manager has to achieve specific object withi..."
- 22:3222:32, 18 February 2019 diff hist +500 N Talk:Hersey and Blanchard's Situational Leadership Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent, however there's a few grammatical errors. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''..."
- 22:2622:26, 18 February 2019 diff hist +1 Talk:DMAIC →Feedback on Abstract:
- 22:2622:26, 18 February 2019 diff hist +579 N Talk:DMAIC Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== I'm unsure whether or not your abstract at this point is complete, however find my feedback below. {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| Good, howeve..."
- 22:1222:12, 18 February 2019 diff hist +382 N Talk:Determining Measurement Methods in Earned Value Management Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Great, however try to make it more conc..."
- 22:0222:02, 18 February 2019 diff hist +178 Talk:Agile One Page Project Management →Feedback on Abstract:
- 21:5521:55, 18 February 2019 diff hist +407 N Talk:Integrated Project Delivery (IPD) Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is very coherent. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Very good. |- |'''Article purpose ..."
- 21:5321:53, 18 February 2019 diff hist −99 Talk:Agile One Page Project Management →Feedback on Abstract:
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- 21:3621:36, 18 February 2019 diff hist −14 Talk:Agile One Page Project Management →Feedback on Abstract:
- 21:3621:36, 18 February 2019 diff hist +561 N Talk:Agile One Page Project Management Created page with "==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is good, but there's quite a few grammatical mistakes. |- |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''..."
18 February 2018
- 09:3109:31, 18 February 2018 diff hist +1 Talk:Negotiation techniques →Abstract Feedback
- 09:3109:31, 18 February 2018 diff hist −1 Talk:Negotiation techniques →Abstract Feedback
- 09:3009:30, 18 February 2018 diff hist +4 Talk:Negotiation techniques →Abstract Feedback
- 09:3009:30, 18 February 2018 diff hist +809 N Talk:Negotiation techniques Created page with "==Abstract Feedback== '''Text clarity''' Good '''Language''' Good with minor spelling mistakes: e.g. write "her" instead of "hers" and write "role" instead of "rolle..."
16 February 2018
- 13:3713:37, 16 February 2018 diff hist −1 42433 APPPM 2018-Feedback template for Wiki article No edit summary
- 13:3613:36, 16 February 2018 diff hist +1 42433 APPPM 2018-Feedback template for Wiki article No edit summary
- 12:5412:54, 16 February 2018 diff hist −9 Talk:Work Breakdown Structure in Construction Management →Abstract Feedback
- 12:5312:53, 16 February 2018 diff hist +1 Talk:Work Breakdown Structure in Construction Management →Abstract Feedback
- 12:5312:53, 16 February 2018 diff hist +938 N Talk:Work Breakdown Structure in Construction Management Created page with "==Abstract Feedback== '''Text clarity''' Text is good, but avoid writing bullet points in the abstract. The text should flow '''Language''' Good '''Description of t..."