Talk:Project Execution Model (PEM)

Mette: Very nice topic choice that fits the requirements for the type of article. Remember the structure of a "method article". Look forward to reading more about this tool.

Reviewer 1:Andkamp

• Describes an interesting method developed by Novo Nordisk, a nice blend between case study and method description
• Minor English mistakes, that can be corrected through second time reading
• Good presentation of the topics, however some minor grammar mistakes make it a little more difficult to be read
• Nice figures, but missing captions and misplacement could provide a better outlook.
• Main points are clear but not extensively described, in order the reader to get a better understanding of the topic.
• No figure reference
• More effort in inter-wiki links and hyperlinks in the text should be done
• Better matrix of plan communication of stakeholders
• Missing references and bibliography
• Interesting subject with various aspects
• Length of the article is small, as probably it is unfinished, but there is a clear enthusiasm on that subject
• Phases makes a concrete structure of the article but the sections should be better presented in the table of contents.
• It would be nice to see implementations on other business, as well as the pros and cons of this method
• All in all, a nice subject that needs more effort in order to be useful and be connected with subjects such as Project Evaluation and Selection for the Formation of the Optimal Portfolio