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* A well-written article and nice structure. | * A well-written article and nice structure. | ||
* I don’t think you should use “I” and “we” in the article. It is supposed to be objective, and makes it look less professional. | * I don’t think you should use “I” and “we” in the article. It is supposed to be objective, and makes it look less professional. ''Tried to solve it.'' | ||
* Try not to use questions. Try to structure it in a different way. | * Try not to use questions. Try to structure it in a different way. ''Supposed i tried but i kept one and put it in bold after other feedback'' | ||
* I like the sentence you use to explain the difference. But since you have made it such a big deal, maybe use the italic or bold to highlight it. | * I like the sentence you use to explain the difference. But since you have made it such a big deal, maybe use the italic or bold to highlight it.''Done'' | ||
* Try to stay away from words like “actually”, “just” and “only”. Depending on how they are used in a sentence it may not sound very professional. | * Try to stay away from words like “actually”, “just” and “only”. Depending on how they are used in a sentence it may not sound very professional. ''Tried to to it'' | ||
* What are the 2 steps before reaching a Program Management point of view? Tell the reader where he or she will read about it. | * What are the 2 steps before reaching a Program Management point of view? Tell the reader where he or she will read about it. ''Done'' | ||
* I like the pictures and how they relate to the text. They are not, however, directly mentioned in the text. | * I like the pictures and how they relate to the text. They are not, however, directly mentioned in the text. ''Done'' | ||
* Earlier, it was not right to start a sentence with “and” or “but”. This has changed, but you might just be aware of it and not use it all the time. | * Earlier, it was not right to start a sentence with “and” or “but”. This has changed, but you might just be aware of it and not use it all the time. | ||
* Some sentences are very long. Try to shorten them. | * Some sentences are very long. Try to shorten them. | ||
* Remember references! | * Remember references! ''Done'' | ||
Wiki feedback From s117318 | Wiki feedback From s117318 | ||
* Nice figures | |||
* Great structure, easy o follow the topics | |||
* Figure 1 could fit into the text ''Done'' | |||
* For this sentence: In multiple project management, I will study the management of the schedules (Try to avoid using "I") ''Done'' | |||
* Try to avoid using words as "actually". ''Done'' | |||
* Easy to understand | |||
* Create References to Figures you have added and tell why you have added these. ''Done'' | |||
* Be specific, fx. Now, we will stop to see (Remove this, and write something more specific) ''tried to do it'' | |||
* Perhaps a brief discussion/conclusion? | |||
* Make this setence with bold or as SubTopic: How Program Management can solve some uncertainty problem in a MPM? ''Thank you after thinking it was a great advice'' | |||
* An idea: 4. Limitations of Program Management approach | |||
4.1 Inability to “stick” with the project scope: | 4.1 Inability to “stick” with the project scope: | ||
4.2 ecc.. | 4.2 ecc.. | ||
* Be aware of adding more words. | |||
* Be aware of gramma, | |||
* Could Link to other Wiki Articles, like Project Management ''Done'' | |||
* Remember References ''Done'' | |||
* Remember bibliography ''Done'' | |||
Wiki feedback from s142823 | |||
* Very interesting topic, it seems a bit challenging to cover within 3000 words but apparently you succeeded : reading your article hold the attention and it gives the feeling to learn a new concept | |||
* Some grammatical mistakes | |||
* Layout and article structure globally pleasant | |||
* Try to be more objective in the article, avoid the words such as “I”, “me”, or even “you”. ''Tried to change all of these'' | |||
* Try to avoid words such as “actually”, or “but” too often. ''Tried to change all of these'' | |||
* Nice and clear pictures, but they should be more introduced and linked in the text ''Done'' | |||
Latest revision as of 15:11, 1 October 2015
Josef: Hello, thank you for the abstract. "Multi project management" is a fairly broad category. I suggest that you re-think after todays program management lecture if you would like to take a program management or portfolio management angle. All the topics you raise are relevant, but there are also potentially a lot more that you could cover. So it is not entirely clear to me why you chose that particular subset. I would suggest to either focus on one particular aspect, or provide a more high-level overview that can then be "complete". Also please make sure to follow the suggested structure.
Reviewer 3: Alise
- A well-written article and nice structure.
- I don’t think you should use “I” and “we” in the article. It is supposed to be objective, and makes it look less professional. Tried to solve it.
- Try not to use questions. Try to structure it in a different way. Supposed i tried but i kept one and put it in bold after other feedback
- I like the sentence you use to explain the difference. But since you have made it such a big deal, maybe use the italic or bold to highlight it.Done
- Try to stay away from words like “actually”, “just” and “only”. Depending on how they are used in a sentence it may not sound very professional. Tried to to it
- What are the 2 steps before reaching a Program Management point of view? Tell the reader where he or she will read about it. Done
- I like the pictures and how they relate to the text. They are not, however, directly mentioned in the text. Done
- Earlier, it was not right to start a sentence with “and” or “but”. This has changed, but you might just be aware of it and not use it all the time.
- Some sentences are very long. Try to shorten them.
- Remember references! Done
Wiki feedback From s117318
- Nice figures
- Great structure, easy o follow the topics
- Figure 1 could fit into the text Done
- For this sentence: In multiple project management, I will study the management of the schedules (Try to avoid using "I") Done
- Try to avoid using words as "actually". Done
- Easy to understand
- Create References to Figures you have added and tell why you have added these. Done
- Be specific, fx. Now, we will stop to see (Remove this, and write something more specific) tried to do it
- Perhaps a brief discussion/conclusion?
- Make this setence with bold or as SubTopic: How Program Management can solve some uncertainty problem in a MPM? Thank you after thinking it was a great advice
- An idea: 4. Limitations of Program Management approach
4.1 Inability to “stick” with the project scope: 4.2 ecc..
- Be aware of adding more words.
- Be aware of gramma,
- Could Link to other Wiki Articles, like Project Management Done
- Remember References Done
- Remember bibliography Done
Wiki feedback from s142823
- Very interesting topic, it seems a bit challenging to cover within 3000 words but apparently you succeeded : reading your article hold the attention and it gives the feeling to learn a new concept
- Some grammatical mistakes
- Layout and article structure globally pleasant
- Try to be more objective in the article, avoid the words such as “I”, “me”, or even “you”. Tried to change all of these
- Try to avoid words such as “actually”, or “but” too often. Tried to change all of these
- Nice and clear pictures, but they should be more introduced and linked in the text Done