Talk:Value Stream Mapping in Program Management - Revision history

User: /* Response to the Peer Review */

2014-12-04T15:27:11Z

Response to the Peer Review

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	* Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction.		* Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction.

	== Response to the Peer ~~Review~~ ==		== Response to the Peer Reviews ==

	=== To Tallimac ===		=== To Tallimac ===

User at 15:26, 4 December 2014

2014-12-04T15:26:54Z

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	* Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction.		* Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction.

			== Response to the Peer Review ==

			=== To Tallimac ===

			*The headline issue has been solved by reformulating the section
			*The difference between VSA and VSM has been farther distinguished
			*References have been made
			*References have been made

			=== To PPPM Student ===

			*The plan about examples has been rejected, because of property rights everywhere
			*VSA/VSM has been described briefly in the introduction
			*The article has been extended in quality and quantity

			Thanks for your reviews!

Pppm student: /* Comments from "Apppm student" */

2014-11-25T17:22:51Z

Comments from "Apppm student"

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	*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now		*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

	== Comments from "~~Apppm~~ student" ==		== Comments from "Pppm student" ==

	* The pointed sections seems nice and would have been interesting to read. Especially the example would be nice to get to know the method.		* The pointed sections seems nice and would have been interesting to read. Especially the example would be nice to get to know the method.

Pppm student: /* Comments from "Apppm student" */ new section

2014-11-25T17:22:10Z

Comments from "Apppm student": new section

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	*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now		*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

			== Comments from "Apppm student" ==

			* The pointed sections seems nice and would have been interesting to read. Especially the example would be nice to get to know the method.

			* It would be nice for the reader if the VSA and VSM are explained simply in the start of the introduction, but maybe it is not done so far.

			* Again it would be good with more then the abstract and very short introduction.

Tallimac at 15:14, 25 November 2014

2014-11-25T15:14:16Z

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	*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff		*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
	*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. ~~As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref>~~ If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Name"></ref>		*This is done like this <ref name="Name"> What </ref>. If you use the same ref again just type this <ref name="Name"></ref>

	===References===		===References===
	<references/>		<references/>


	*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now		*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

Tallimac at 15:12, 25 November 2014

2014-11-25T15:12:56Z

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	*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff		*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
	*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Name"></ref>		*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Name"></ref>
			===References===
	<references/>		<references/>

	*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now		*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

Tallimac at 15:12, 25 November 2014

2014-11-25T15:12:29Z

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	*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff		*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
	*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="~~Class~~"></ref>		*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Name"></ref>
	<references/>		<references/>

	*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now		*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

Tallimac at 15:12, 25 November 2014

2014-11-25T15:12:13Z

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	== Feedback from Tallimac ==		== Feedback from Tallimac ==

	*"The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything.		*"The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything. You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)
	You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)

	*really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other		*really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other
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	*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff		*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
	*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Class"></ref>		*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Class"></ref>
			<references/>

	*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now		*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now

Tallimac: /* Feedback from Tallimac */ new section

2014-11-25T15:11:40Z

Feedback from Tallimac: new section

New page

== Feedback from Tallimac ==

*"The method addressed by the headline is Value Stream Mapping" A bit weird formulation as a headline cannot address anything.
You decide what the article is about and you write it not the headline :)

*really good to tell about the VSM and compare it with the VSA - Maybe tell about what came first and how is the one thing developed from the other

*Remember to put in references especially where you define what what VSM is and where you also define other stuff
*<ref name="Name"> What </ref>. As the color of the bubbles also serves as a dimension of data, is displayed in the bottom </ref> If you use the same ref again just type <ref name="Class"></ref>

*I hope you will do great but i have no chance of giving you more feedback right now