Talk:Shannon & Weaver Model for Communication - Revision history

Ripo at 20:04, 28 February 2019

2019-02-28T20:04:27Z

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	Overall the article is coherent and transparent, as the argument the author wants to communicate is clear from the beginning. Maybe I would have the 'Limitations' chapter ~~before~~ the one about the application of the model within Project Management. But that's a matter of taste, I guess.		Overall the article is coherent and transparent, as the argument the author wants to communicate is clear from the beginning. Maybe I would have the 'Limitations' chapter after the one about the application of the model within Project Management. But that's a matter of taste, I guess.

2019-02-25T21:51:32Z

Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Andreas Tuxen

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The abstract gives a good overview of the article. Maybe some of the first part can be used as an introduction.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The article has a good flow and does not contradict itself. It was an interesting historical overview, it maybe it could be shortened a little bit.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''Good language, did not find errors''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''I liked the models, there were only 2 but you mentioned in the top there is some problems with uploading.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''I think it is very relevant to be able to analyze communication. I would like to know more practical tips and implementation, in the end you mentioned communication management strategy, how can Shanon Weaver model affect this?''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''Yes, interesting read.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''All good!''

2019-02-25T21:39:10Z

Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Place your name here

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	It seems like everything is as it should be. Good job.		It seems like everything is as it should be. Good job.

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	'''Quality of the summary:'''		'''Quality of the summary:'''

2019-02-24T19:01:35Z

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	''The presented figures gives the reader a quick and good understanding of what is being explained in the article. Not too complex, not too simple.''		The presented figures gives the reader a quick and good understanding of what is being explained in the article. Not too complex, not too simple.''

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2019-02-24T19:00:26Z

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	Before diving into the article's subject, the author introduces the reader to the concept of communication when managing projects, ~~giving a clear idea~~ of why it is so important. Really good summary.		Before diving into the article's subject, the author introduces the reader to the concept of communication when managing projects, and gives an explanation of why it is so important. Really good summary.

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2019-02-24T18:58:41Z

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	The topic is relevant and ~~therefore~~ interesting to read.''		The topic is relevant and interesting to read. I would though suggest to make the chapter about the model's history shorter, as it does not really add value to the purpose of the article. I would instead focus a bit more on the apllication of the model, as there is a lack of examples for the three presented aspects.

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	~~''Answer here''~~		It seems like everything is as it should be. Good job.

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2019-02-24T18:48:25Z

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	~~''As I said, the~~ topic is relevant and therefore interesting to read.''		The topic is relevant and therefore interesting to read.''

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2019-02-24T18:47:58Z

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	The author states in the abstract that communication ''"is seen as the foundation function that integrates the areas of scope, schedule and resources''. I couldn't agree more, as nothing can be accomplished in a project without a transparent and unambigous exchange of informations between the involved parts.		The author states in the abstract that communication ''"is seen as the foundation function that integrates the areas of scope, schedule and resources"''. I couldn't agree more, as nothing can be accomplished in a project without a transparent and unambigous exchange of informations between the involved parts.

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2019-02-24T18:47:42Z

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	~~''As the~~ author states in the abstract~~, the~~ communication is ''the foundation function that integrates the areas of scope, schedule and resources''~~, and~~ I couldn't agree more, as nothing can be accomplished in a project without a ~~clear~~ and unambigous exchange of informations between the involved parts.		The author states in the abstract that communication ''"is seen as the foundation function that integrates the areas of scope, schedule and resources''. I couldn't agree more, as nothing can be accomplished in a project without a transparent and unambigous exchange of informations between the involved parts.

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2019-02-24T18:45:19Z

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	The author masters the langauge pretty well. Easy reading. I only found a single grammatical error in the sentence ''The development of the Shannon and Weaver Model of Communication has highlighted three interrelated aspect ('''aspects'''), that can serve….''		The author masters the langauge pretty well. Easy reading. I only found a single grammatical error in the sentence ''"The development of the Shannon and Weaver Model of Communication has highlighted three interrelated aspect ('''aspects'''), that can serve…."''

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