Talk:Omnichannel strategy - Revision history

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	The abstract mentions ''"The use of agile Project Management approaches to IT and Business"'', explains the current situations and trends in the retail sector and the requirement of ''"new management approaches and innovative tools for the Supply Chain"'' but fails to explain or connect this tool(s)/theory(s)/concept(s) with the strategy (Omnichannel strategy) described in the abstract in relation of the management of Portfolio(s), Program(s) or Project(s) in the retail sector.		The abstract mentions ''"The use of agile Project Management approaches to IT and Business"'', explains the current situations and trends in the retail sector and the requirement of ''"new management approaches and innovative tools for the Supply Chain"'' but fails to explain or connect this tool(s)/theory(s)/concept(s) with the strategy (Omnichannel strategy) described in the abstract in relation of the management of Portfolio(s), Program(s) or Project(s) in the retail sector.

			The abstract describes the potential benefits of the strategy, but does not explain what is the purpose of the tool(s)/theory(s)/concept(s).

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			The abstract mentions ''"The use of agile Project Management approaches to IT and Business"'', explains the current situations and trends in the retail sector and the requirement of ''"new management approaches and innovative tools for the Supply Chain"'' but fails to explain or connect this tool(s)/theory(s)/concept(s) with the strategy (Omnichannel strategy) described in the abstract in relation of the management of Portfolio(s), Program(s) or Project(s) in the retail sector.

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2017-09-18T11:10:50Z

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	\|'''Purpose explanation'''\|\| ~~Is there but~~ not clear ~~for~~ the ~~reader~~, try to ~~reformulate by explaining~~ the intention of the article		\|'''Purpose explanation'''\|\| There is not clear explanation of the purpose of the article, try to explain the intention of the article
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	\|'''Purpose explanation'''\|\| Is there but not clear for the reader, try to reformulate by explaining the intention of the article		\|'''Purpose explanation'''\|\| Is there but not clear for the reader, try to reformulate by explaining the intention of the article

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