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<p>Created page with &quot;==Feedback on Abstract:== {| |&#039;&#039;&#039;Text clarity&#039;&#039;&#039;|| The text sounds comprehensible and it builds on references |- |&#039;&#039;&#039;Language&#039;&#039;&#039;|| OK |- |&#039;&#039;&#039;Description of the tool/theory/c...&quot;</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>==Feedback on Abstract:==<br /> <br /> {|<br /> |&#039;&#039;&#039;Text clarity&#039;&#039;&#039;|| The text sounds comprehensible and it builds on references<br /> |-<br /> |&#039;&#039;&#039;Language&#039;&#039;&#039;|| OK <br /> |-<br /> |&#039;&#039;&#039;Description of the tool/theory/concept&#039;&#039;&#039;|| OK, no mention to which aspect of Portfolio, Program, Project management can be applied<br /> |-<br /> |&#039;&#039;&#039;Purpose explanation&#039;&#039;&#039;|| Is there but clear for the reader<br /> |-<br /> |&#039;&#039;&#039;Title of the Wiki&#039;&#039;&#039;|| OK<br /> |-<br /> |&#039;&#039;&#039;References&#039;&#039;&#039;|| OK<br /> |}<br /> <br /> ==Other==<br /> <br /> The abstract describe three concepts but fails to describe to which aspect of Portfolio, Program, Project management can be applied.<br /> <br /> The abstract also should consider to provide a better formulation of the purpose intended with the article.</div>

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