Talk:Earned Value Management - Revision history

Nannats at 18:52, 27 September 2015

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	• Your references look good <br>		• Your references look good <br>
	- '''~~Tanks~~ :-)'''		- '''Thanks :-)'''


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	• The comparison with Tradition Cost Management in the end is good, and also the paragraph with Limitations. As your article is a bit short, I think you advantageously can extend the discussion. <br>		• The comparison with Tradition Cost Management in the end is good, and also the paragraph with Limitations. As your article is a bit short, I think you advantageously can extend the discussion. <br>
	- '''I have tried to add some extra to the "limitations" part.'''		- '''I have tried to add some extra to the "limitations" part.'''
	<br>		<br> <br>
	'''Thank you for the feedback, s150621 :-) '''		'''Thank you for the feedback, s150621 :-) '''

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	I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed: <br>		I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed: <br>
	'''Dear S113815.''' <br>		'''Dear S113815.''' <br>
	'''Thanks for your great feedback on my article and thanks for being so profound :-) You have made some good points, and I have tried to incorporate some of your ideas. I have answered/commented on your points:''' ~~<br>~~ <br>		'''Thanks for your great feedback on my article and thanks for being so profound :-) You have made some good points, and I have tried to incorporate some of your ideas. I have answered/commented on your points:''' <br>


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	# Very good and specific sections on Performance measurements and indices with clear examples.		# Very good and specific sections on Performance measurements and indices with clear examples.
	# The figures perfectly underline the calculations. You can consider to add more descriptive figure texts to the figures.		# The figures perfectly underline the calculations. You can consider to add more descriptive figure texts to the figures.
	''' - Yes, I have added some more text to the figures.'''		''' - Yes, I agree. I have added some more text to the figures.'''
	# You can eventually elaborate a bit on Estimate to completion (ETC)		# You can eventually elaborate a bit on Estimate to completion (ETC)
	''' - Yes I also thought of that, but I came to the conclusion that it wasn't essentiel for the subject and for the reader.'''		''' - Yes I also thought of that, but I came to the conclusion that it wasn't essentiel for the subject and for the reader.'''
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	# In general a well structured and precise article. The content has been cut to the bone but contains all relevant description and examples. Very nice reading.		# In general a well structured and precise article. The content has been cut to the bone but contains all relevant description and examples. Very nice reading.
	# References according to Wiki-standards.		# References according to Wiki-standards.
	''' - Thank you :-) '''		''' - Thank you for the feedback, s140046 :-) '''

Nannats at 18:40, 27 September 2015

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	- '''I have tried to add some extra to the "limitations" part.'''		- '''I have tried to add some extra to the "limitations" part.'''
	<br>		<br>
	Thank you for the feedback :-) '''		'''Thank you for the feedback, s150621 :-) '''

Nannats at 18:39, 27 September 2015

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	• The comparison with Tradition Cost Management in the end is good, and also the paragraph with Limitations. As your article is a bit short, I think you advantageously can extend the discussion. <br>		• The comparison with Tradition Cost Management in the end is good, and also the paragraph with Limitations. As your article is a bit short, I think you advantageously can extend the discussion. <br>
	- '''I have tried to add some extra to the "limitations" part.'''		- '''I have tried to add some extra to the "limitations" part.'''
			<br>
			Thank you for the feedback :-) '''

Nannats at 17:06, 27 September 2015

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	- '''I have now added a figure in the "Performance Indicies", which illustrates the example.'''		- '''I have now added a figure in the "Performance Indicies", which illustrates the example.'''
	* I would like an example and a figure in the “Forecasting” part. I feel like it is not as well described as the other parts.		* I would like an example and a figure in the “Forecasting” part. I feel like it is not as well described as the other parts.
			- '''I have added an example of the three ways to calculate the EAC in the "Forecasting" part., so it might be easier to follow. The example is based on the previous examples in the article, so it is the same project example through the whole article.'''
	* The three sub-headlines under forecast (Variances are typical, Variances are typical, Variances will be present in the future) are all starting with 1. Is that the intention or a format question?		* The three sub-headlines under forecast (Variances are typical, Variances are typical, Variances will be present in the future) are all starting with 1. Is that the intention or a format question?
	- '''Oh, that was a format mistake. Well spotted :) '''		- '''Oh, that was a format mistake. Well spotted :) '''

Nannats at 15:38, 27 September 2015

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	''' - Yes I also thought of that, but I came to the conclusion that it wasn't essentiel for the subject and for the reader.'''		''' - Yes I also thought of that, but I came to the conclusion that it wasn't essentiel for the subject and for the reader.'''
	# Typo: for example The Critical Path Method (CPM), it could provide invaluable into the true schedule status of the project. Should (probably) be… info to the true…?		# Typo: for example The Critical Path Method (CPM), it could provide invaluable into the true schedule status of the project. Should (probably) be… info to the true…?
			- ''' Well spotted :-) The typo is now corrected.'''
	# Clear points in the limitations section.		# Clear points in the limitations section.
	# In general a well structured and precise article. The content has been cut to the bone but contains all relevant description and examples. Very nice reading.		# In general a well structured and precise article. The content has been cut to the bone but contains all relevant description and examples. Very nice reading.
	# References according to Wiki-standards.		# References according to Wiki-standards.
	''' - Thank you :-) '''		''' - Thank you :-) '''

Nannats at 15:37, 27 September 2015

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Nannats at 15:33, 27 September 2015

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	# Great with internal link and suitable description of WBS		# Great with internal link and suitable description of WBS
	# The total budget in table without number or title is $100.000. It should be $60.000. It seems to be double both with the actual calculations and with the table. You can consider to skip the table?		# The total budget in table without number or title is $100.000. It should be $60.000. It seems to be double both with the actual calculations and with the table. You can consider to skip the table?
			''' - No, it is correct with the $100.000, because that is the total budget. The table is just for an overview, and to see the purpose of the WBS.'''
	# Very good and specific sections on Performance measurements and indices with clear examples.		# Very good and specific sections on Performance measurements and indices with clear examples.
	# The figures perfectly underline the calculations. You can consider to add more descriptive figure texts to the figures.		# The figures perfectly underline the calculations. You can consider to add more descriptive figure texts to the figures.
			''' - Yes, I have added some more text to the figures.'''
	# You can eventually elaborate a bit on Estimate to completion (ETC)		# You can eventually elaborate a bit on Estimate to completion (ETC)
	# Typo: for example The Critical Path Method (CPM), it could provide invaluable into the true schedule status of the project. Should (probably) be… info to the true…?		# Typo: for example The Critical Path Method (CPM), it could provide invaluable into the true schedule status of the project. Should (probably) be… info to the true…?

Nannats at 15:26, 27 September 2015

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	First of all, I think the article is consistently well-written and explains a tool which is very useful in the field of project management. There structure of the article seems to follow the guidelines from the assignment. There is a red thread throughout the article and the examples is easy to understand.		First of all, I think the article is consistently well-written and explains a tool which is very useful in the field of project management. There structure of the article seems to follow the guidelines from the assignment. There is a red thread throughout the article and the examples is easy to understand.
	I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed: <br>		I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed: <br>
	'''Dear S113815. <br>		'''Dear S113815.''' <br>
	Thanks for your great feedback on my article and thanks for being so profound :-) You have made some good points, and I have tried to incorporate some of your ideas. I have answered/commented on your points:''' <br> <br>		'''Thanks for your great feedback on my article and thanks for being so profound :-) You have made some good points, and I have tried to incorporate some of your ideas. I have answered/commented on your points:''' <br> <br>

Nannats at 15:26, 27 September 2015

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	First of all, I think the article is consistently well-written and explains a tool which is very useful in the field of project management. There structure of the article seems to follow the guidelines from the assignment. There is a red thread throughout the article and the examples is easy to understand.		First of all, I think the article is consistently well-written and explains a tool which is very useful in the field of project management. There structure of the article seems to follow the guidelines from the assignment. There is a red thread throughout the article and the examples is easy to understand.
	I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed: <br>		I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed: <br>
	Dear S113815. <br>		'''Dear S113815. <br>
	Thanks for your great feedback on my article and thanks for being so profound :-) You have made some good points, and I have tried to incorporate some of your ideas. I have answered/commented on your points: <br> <br>		Thanks for your great feedback on my article and thanks for being so profound :-) You have made some good points, and I have tried to incorporate some of your ideas. I have answered/commented on your points:''' <br> <br>

Nannats at 15:25, 27 September 2015

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	• The use of links to other articles, as for example WBS, is nice		• The use of links to other articles, as for example WBS, is nice

	• Your references look good		• Your references look good <br>
	- '''Tanks :-)'''		- '''Tanks :-)'''

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	After reviewing your article, I have following comments:		After reviewing your article, I have following comments:
	First of all, I think the article is consistently well-written and explains a tool which is very useful in the field of project management. There structure of the article seems to follow the guidelines from the assignment. There is a red thread throughout the article and the examples is easy to understand.		First of all, I think the article is consistently well-written and explains a tool which is very useful in the field of project management. There structure of the article seems to follow the guidelines from the assignment. There is a red thread throughout the article and the examples is easy to understand.
	I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed:		I have made some comments and tried to make some suggestions to make the article even better, they are as followed: <br>
			Dear S113815. <br>
			Thanks for your great feedback on my article and thanks for being so profound :-) You have made some good points, and I have tried to incorporate some of your ideas. I have answered/commented on your points: <br> <br>


	'''Summery Part:'''		'''Summery Part:'''
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	* In think that this part might be a little short..		* In think that this part might be a little short..
	* Would it be possible to add the quality part into the EVM?		* Would it be possible to add the quality part into the EVM?
			- '''I have tried to add some extra to the "limitations" part.'''


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	- '''Great, thanks :-)'''		- '''Great, thanks :-)'''
	* As you still have 1000 words to use, you might consider a longer “Limitations”-part. Or maybe an extra example to strengthen your theory.		* As you still have 1000 words to use, you might consider a longer “Limitations”-part. Or maybe an extra example to strengthen your theory.
			- '''I have added extra text through the article.'''

	'''''All in all a very nice article – and good work. :)'''''		'''''All in all a very nice article – and good work. :)'''''



	s140046 Review 2		s140046 Review 2

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	# Fine introduction and background section		# Fine introduction and background section
	# Great with internal link and suitable description of WBS		# Great with internal link and suitable description of WBS
			'''- Thanks.'''
	# The total budget in table without number or title is $100.000. It should be $60.000. It seems to be double both with the actual calculations and with the table. You can consider to skip the table?		# The total budget in table without number or title is $100.000. It should be $60.000. It seems to be double both with the actual calculations and with the table. You can consider to skip the table?
	''' - No, it is correct with the $100.000, because that is the total budget. The table is just for an overview, and to see the purpose of the WBS.'''		''' - No, it is correct with the $100.000, because that is the total budget. The table is just for an overview, and to see the purpose of the WBS.'''
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	''' - Yes, I have added some more text to the figures.'''		''' - Yes, I have added some more text to the figures.'''
	# You can eventually elaborate a bit on Estimate to completion (ETC)		# You can eventually elaborate a bit on Estimate to completion (ETC)
			''' - Yes I also thought of that, but I came to the conclusion that it wasn't essentiel for the subject and for the reader.'''
	# Typo: for example The Critical Path Method (CPM), it could provide invaluable into the true schedule status of the project. Should (probably) be… info to the true…?		# Typo: for example The Critical Path Method (CPM), it could provide invaluable into the true schedule status of the project. Should (probably) be… info to the true…?
	# Clear points in the limitations section.		# Clear points in the limitations section.
	# In general a well structured and precise article. The content has been cut to the bone but contains all relevant description and examples. Very nice reading.		# In general a well structured and precise article. The content has been cut to the bone but contains all relevant description and examples. Very nice reading.
	# References according to Wiki-standards.		# References according to Wiki-standards.
			''' - Thank you :-) '''