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Talk:Creating a Learning Organization

2016-09-14T18:40:45Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Matilde, Thanks for your wiki abstract :) The topic is interesting. All good! It suits the PPPM. Remember to highlight WHY this tool is fundamental for PPPM. Furthermore..."

Dear Matilde,
Thanks for your wiki abstract :)
The topic is interesting. All good! It suits the PPPM. Remember to highlight WHY this tool is fundamental for PPPM.
Furthermore try to insert a case study or an example to make it more personal and also to help the reader to follow.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:Project Management Triangle

2016-09-13T13:51:42Z

Jejenji:

Dear Swaroop Kumar,
Nice tool. I like it and it is highly correlated with PPPM.
Fluent english and structure.
I would recommend you to insert examples in the full article to make it more personal.
And remember to always highlight WHY this tool is vital for PPPM.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
WELL DONE :)
Jess

P.S
Check the formatting because a part of the text doesn't fit the layout.

Talk:Project Management Triangle

2016-09-13T13:51:08Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Swaroop Kumar, Nice tool. I like it and it is highly correlated with PPPM. Fluent english and structure. I would recommend you to insert examples in the full article to..."

Talk:Critical-Chain Approach

2016-09-13T13:42:50Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Gudrun Thóra, Thanks for your wiki abstract. I really like the topic. WELL DONE :) The structure is fluent. Good english. Remember to highlight WHY this approach is v..."

Dear Gudrun Thóra,
Thanks for your wiki abstract.
I really like the topic. WELL DONE :)
The structure is fluent. Good english.
Remember to highlight WHY this approach is vital for PPPM.
Furthermore adding some practical examples would help the reader to better understand the theory behind it.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.

BRAVO!

Jess

Talk:The Chunnel Project

2016-09-13T13:35:27Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Siri, Thanks for your wiki abstract. The case study you want to elaborate on is really nice. I totally like to topic and I think it makes sense in the PPPM context. Fro..."

Dear Siri,
Thanks for your wiki abstract.
The case study you want to elaborate on is really nice. I totally like to topic and I think it makes sense in the PPPM context.
From your abstract though I don't really get what is your focus area.

- Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers. We are not writing the article for professionals in general, but for this specific target group.

- Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach to the point where a reader can use it (ideally with templates and examples). A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.

- Review the suggested article structure in the Wiki assignment on CampusNet (or in the class handbook), and make sure you cover all the relevant aspects. You are free to deviate from it you think that makes more sense for your assignment.

- A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.

Jess

Talk:The agile framework Scrum in the context of lean project management

2016-09-13T13:16:36Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Kai-Sören Sokolowski, Thanks for your wiki abstract. I like the topic. It makes sense for PPPM and you are analysing it from different angles/applications. Fluent engl..."

Dear Kai-Sören Sokolowski,
Thanks for your wiki abstract.
I like the topic. It makes sense for PPPM and you are analysing it from different angles/applications.
Fluent english.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
WELL DONE :)
Jess

Talk:Integrating Mindfulness in Project and Program Management

2016-09-13T13:09:32Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Joao, Thanks for your wiki abstract. From your summary I'm quiet confused about what you are gonna describe. Is your focus --> Mindfulness in High Reliability Organisati..."

Dear Joao,
Thanks for your wiki abstract.
From your summary I'm quiet confused about what you are gonna describe. Is your focus --> Mindfulness in High Reliability Organisations ??
--> Try to sharpen the focus on a specific aspect.
--> Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers
--> Review the suggested article structure in the Wiki assignment on CampusNet (or in the class handbook), and make sure you cover all the relevant aspects. You are free to deviate from it you think that makes more sense for your assignment.

If you have some doubts please come to me and together we gonna find a solution :)

Jess

Talk:Best Practices for Project Portfolio Selection

2016-09-13T12:50:59Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Phillip, Thanks for your wiki abstract. Nice topic. Good choice :) I like it. Good flow and good english! Remember to stress the importance of those tools for the PPPM..."

Dear Phillip,
Thanks for your wiki abstract.
Nice topic. Good choice :) I like it.
Good flow and good english!
Remember to stress the importance of those tools for the PPPM in the introduction.
When describing each method, you should give an explanation of what it is and maybe add an example. That would help the reader to understand better the meaning of what you are talking about.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:How PERT builds up on CPM

2016-09-13T12:44:45Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Olöf Run, Thanks for having uploaded your wiki article. The topic is ok for PPPM but it is quiet superficial from my point of view. Furthermore another student is exact..."

Dear Olöf Run,
Thanks for having uploaded your wiki article.
The topic is ok for PPPM but it is quiet superficial from my point of view. Furthermore another student is exactly doing the same topic.
You should sharp the focus on a specific aspect of this CPM or try to do it in regards of a case study.
Review the suggested article structure in the Wiki assignment on CampusNet (or in the class handbook), and make sure you cover all the relevant aspects. You are free to deviate from it you think that makes more sense for your assignment.
Try to make the topic more personal
If you have doubts please feel free to contact me and together we gonna find a solution :)
Jess

Talk:Cost Estimation Techniques for Projects

2016-09-13T12:38:50Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Nikolaus, Thanks for your wiki abstract. The topic is interesting but from your summary I don't get which techniques you are going to use. Please mention them in you in..."

Dear Nikolaus,
Thanks for your wiki abstract.
The topic is interesting but from your summary I don't get which techniques you are going to use.
Please mention them in you introduction.
Make examples for each technique.
And super important is to compare them. A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Fluent english.
Jess

Talk:Motivation in Project Management from the Project Manager’s Perspective

2016-09-13T12:32:08Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Niels Christian, Thanks for you wiki abstract. The topic itself is interesting but from my point of view it is still too general and broad. If I were you, I would sharpen..."

Dear Niels Christian,
Thanks for you wiki abstract. The topic itself is interesting but from my point of view it is still too general and broad. If I were you, I would sharpen it in a specific area or case study to avoid being too superficial.
Few notes
- Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers. We are not writing the article for professionals in general, but for this specific target group.
- Review the suggested article structure in the Wiki assignment on CampusNet (or in the class handbook), and make sure you cover all the relevant aspects. You are free to deviate from it you think that makes more sense for your assignment.
- A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:The Leader's role in projects, programs and portfolios

2016-09-13T12:07:19Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Nicklas, Thanks for the wiki abstract. The topic is really interesting. I'm looking forward to read about it. Few english mistakes. Remember to highlight WHY this topic..."

Dear Nicklas,
Thanks for the wiki abstract. The topic is really interesting. I'm looking forward to read about it.
Few english mistakes.
Remember to highlight WHY this topic is important and relevant for the PPPM. In the intro something in regards to this has to pop up.
The flow of the structure is all right.
In chapter 3 (3.1 // 3.2 // 3.3 ) try to make examples. They make the topic personal and the reader understands better.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:How to successfully go through the Five Stages of Team Development

2016-09-13T12:01:04Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Natacha, Thanks for your abstract. The topic is interesting but from my point of view it is quiet broad. To avoid ending up in a superficial assignment, I would highly r..."

Dear Natacha,
Thanks for your abstract.
The topic is interesting but from my point of view it is quiet broad. To avoid ending up in a superficial assignment, I would highly recommend you to sharpen the focus on a specific area. For example --> gives concrete tips on how to recognise issues and how to tackle them
Try to find some literature behind those concepts.
In most of the companies there are written steps but in reality something else happens. Go in depth in that direction.
Good english. Fluent.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:VDC as a project management tool on construction projects

2016-09-13T11:54:45Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Mie Louise Elsborg, Thanks a lot for the wiki abstract. WELL DONE. The structure is perfect. You insert everything you need. You describe the theory and then you proceed ..."

Dear Mie Louise Elsborg,
Thanks a lot for the wiki abstract. WELL DONE. The structure is perfect. You insert everything you need. You describe the theory and then you proceed with an example. And at the end you explain the limitations. Remember to be critical from your point of view in that part. It is important to make the article PERSONAL not just a paraphrasing some literature.
Regarding the abstract it is a bit not clear at the beginning when you start your topic. You should think that your reader does not know the topic.
As first phrase I would define what VDC stands for and WHY that is important for PPPM in construction.
For the rest everything's good.
Jess

Talk:Managing Group Development using the Johari Window

2016-09-13T11:47:30Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Mariana Oulfat, Thanks for your wiki abstract. Really well done. It's nice that you highlighted the keywords. It helps to understand deeply the topic. Looking at the str..."

Dear Mariana Oulfat,
Thanks for your wiki abstract.
Really well done. It's nice that you highlighted the keywords. It helps to understand deeply the topic.
Looking at the structure is fluent and relevant.
If you can add an example to make the article more personal and let the reader deeply understand what you are talking about in a more practical way.
Good english
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:Project Management tool: Gantt Chart

2016-09-13T09:08:50Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Stephanie, thanks for the abstract. Your summary is a bit short to be able to judge it. The topic is ok but try to sharpen the focus on a particular aspect. First of al..."

Dear Stephanie,
thanks for the abstract. Your summary is a bit short to be able to judge it.
The topic is ok but try to sharpen the focus on a particular aspect.
First of all --> Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers. We are not writing the article for professionals in general, but for this specific target group.
Second --> Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach to the point where a reader can use it (ideally with templates and examples). A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.

And then BE CRITICAL. It is important that you give your own view about it. Say pros and cons. And be supported by literature.

If you need any help, feel free to contact me :)

Jess

Talk:The Kanban system

2016-09-13T09:06:39Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Carlos, Thanks for ur abstract. Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers. We are not writing the article for profession..."

Dear Carlos,
Thanks for ur abstract.
Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers. We are not writing the article for professionals in general, but for this specific target group.
Compare the tools you use to make the article more personal. Give you own idea about it. Say pros and cons and find literature to support your thesis :)
Good topic.
Fluent english
Jess

Talk:Risk matrix

2016-09-13T09:03:33Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Artem, Thanks for the wiki abstract. The summary you made is a bit confused. In the intro --> Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / po..."

Dear Artem,
Thanks for the wiki abstract.
The summary you made is a bit confused.
In the intro --> Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers.
In the main body --> Try to sharpen the focus on a particular aspect. Make examples. Make it clear.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.

Try to review the suggested article structure in the Wiki assignment on CampusNet (or in the class handbook), and make sure you cover all the relevant aspects. You are free to deviate from it you think that makes more sense for your assignment.

Jess

Talk:Communication and Managing People in Change Projects

2016-09-13T08:59:19Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Arjun Abraham, Thanks for your abstract. The topic is relevant for PPPM. In the first part of your article remember to highlight WHY your topic is vital for PPPM. Nice ..."

Dear Arjun Abraham,
Thanks for your abstract. The topic is relevant for PPPM.
In the first part of your article remember to highlight WHY your topic is vital for PPPM.
Nice tools that you wanna use (Clampitt’s five communication strategies ||Maslow’s hierarchy || Herzberg’s Motivator-Hygiene theory ). Try to compare them if you can.
Few english mistakes. Remember that MUST is quiet strong to use. It is an obligation. Might would suit better the context.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:Using the bowtie method to evaluate the risks in a construction project

2016-09-12T12:58:33Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Filip, Thanks for being on time with the delivery. The topic is interesting. Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers...."

Dear Filip,
Thanks for being on time with the delivery.
The topic is interesting.
Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers. We are not writing the article for professionals in general, but for this specific target group.
I noticed that another person is writing in regards to constructions. Even if the other topic is "LAST PLANNER SYSTEM" , try to focus your article in a specific direction.

Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach to the point where a reader can use it (ideally with templates and examples). A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.

Provide examples or a case study to be make ur article more personal.

Good flow.

A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.

Jess

Talk:The Kaizen – Toyota KATA method

2016-09-12T12:52:28Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Evgeniya, I have now finished reviewing your wiki abstract, many thanks for uploading it in time and well done. Here are some points I would suggest: - Try and be more..."

Dear Evgeniya,

I have now finished reviewing your wiki abstract, many thanks for uploading it in time and well done. Here are some points I would suggest:

- Try and be more explicit regarding the relevance for project / program / portfolio managers.

- Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach to the point where a reader can use it (ideally with templates and examples). A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.

- Try to provide examples of the Toyota. How was before KATA ? How was after ? Pros ? Cons ?

- A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.

- Remember to keep track of the references

- Fluent english

WELL DONE

Jess

Talk:Implementation of the project management phases in volunteer student NGOs: The case of BEST

2016-09-12T12:49:55Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Evdoxia, Thanks for having uploaded the wiki abstract on time. Good that you chose the case study. The topic makes sense in the pppm context. At the end of the article, ..."

Dear Evdoxia,
Thanks for having uploaded the wiki abstract on time. Good that you chose the case study. The topic makes sense in the pppm context.
At the end of the article, after the description of the various phases try to give your personal opinion. Being part of BEST, you can say what went wrong or what went extremely well. Explain it.
Good job.
Jess

Talk:Sustainability in Project and Portfolio Management

2016-09-12T12:45:13Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Erika, Thanks for having uploaded the wiki abstract on time. The topic is original and it makes sense in PPPM context. Few comments: To make the article more personal, ..."

Dear Erika,
Thanks for having uploaded the wiki abstract on time.
The topic is original and it makes sense in PPPM context.
Few comments:
To make the article more personal, I would recommend you to insert some examples.
Furthermore be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
English is fluent and easy to read.
Well done.
Jess

Talk:Resource Allocation in Project Management

2016-09-12T12:41:35Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Davide, Thanks for having uploaded the wiki abstract on time. The topic itself is relevant for the PPPM. Good choice. Try to sharp the focus of your article. At the end, ..."

Dear Davide,
Thanks for having uploaded the wiki abstract on time. The topic itself is relevant for the PPPM. Good choice. Try to sharp the focus of your article. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach to the point. A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.
Also in the introduction you should highlight WHY this RA is relevant for PPPM.
Few english mistakes.
Overall good job
Jess

Talk:Total Quality Management

2016-09-12T12:36:07Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Christoffer Koza, Thanks for having uploaded the abstract on time. We appreciated it. Your abstract is quiet short and it is hard to provide you a qualitative feedback. ..."

Dear Christoffer Koza,
Thanks for having uploaded the abstract on time. We appreciated it.
Your abstract is quiet short and it is hard to provide you a qualitative feedback.
Please elaborate on it a bit more. Creating an index can definitely help to have an overview :)
Review the suggested article structure in the Wiki assignment on CampusNet (or in the class handbook), and make sure you cover all the relevant aspects. You are free to deviate from it you think that makes more sense for your assignment.
If you are in doubt please contact me and together we gonna find a solution.
Jess

Talk:Last Planner System as a project management tool

2016-09-12T12:33:41Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Christiane, Thanks for having uploaded your abstract in time. The topic is interesting. Well done. The flow is good. Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most poi..."

Dear Christiane,
Thanks for having uploaded your abstract in time. The topic is interesting. Well done. The flow is good.
Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach to the point where a reader can use it (ideally with templates and examples). A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.
Try to focus on a specific area or an example to be more concrete.
Furthermore a suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:AHP as a Decision Making Tool in Projects, Programs and Portfolios

2016-09-12T12:01:54Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Christian, Thanks for having done the wiki abstract on time :) We appreciated it. Good choice. It makes sense. Few comments: Try to give a clear definition of what AHP ..."

Dear Christian,
Thanks for having done the wiki abstract on time :) We appreciated it.
Good choice. It makes sense.
Few comments:
Try to give a clear definition of what AHP is. Also what does it stand for ?
I saw in the index that you insert an example. PERFECT. Go for it. it will help to clarify better the topic.
Some english mistakes. Try to make simple phrases also to help the reader to follow.
Good job
Jess

Talk:Multi-criteria decision making (MCDM) for Project selection

2016-09-12T11:57:01Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Christian, I have now finished reviewing your wiki abstract, many thanks for uploading it in time. The topic is fundamental for PPPM. This fits the criteria. Due to some ..."

Dear Christian,
I have now finished reviewing your wiki abstract, many thanks for uploading it in time. The topic is fundamental for PPPM. This fits the criteria.
Due to some english mistakes, sometimes it is a bit hard to follow. Try to make shorter phrases.
Furthermore
Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach. A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.
Try to focus in a specific area.
In case you are in doubt contact me that we can find a solution together.
Jess

Talk:A product rationalization project part of a portfolio optimization program

2016-09-12T11:46:08Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Christian, thanks for being on time with the delivery of the wiki abstract. Good job. The topic fits the criteria. A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen ..."

Dear Christian,
thanks for being on time with the delivery of the wiki abstract.
Good job. The topic fits the criteria. A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article. So if I were you I would focus mainly on those 2 chapters ( 2.1 ABC analysis & 2.2 SKU rationalisation).
Few english mistakes. Try to make phrases not too long or redundant. Better having clear short phrases than long ones.
Jess

Talk:The Critical Path Method in project planning

2016-09-12T11:39:11Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Chalida, first of all thanks for having uploaded it on time. Here some points: The topic is relevant for the PPPM. If i were you, after an explanation about the CPM and ..."

Dear Chalida,
first of all thanks for having uploaded it on time.
Here some points:
The topic is relevant for the PPPM. If i were you, after an explanation about the CPM and how to do it, i would focus on --> 4 Cost and time trade off & 5 Comparison to related project management technique.
This way you would make it more personal with a critical view.
Adding an example can definitely help.
Good english.
Well done.
Jess

Talk:Lean Design Management

2016-09-12T11:34:58Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Carl, thanks for having uploaded the abstract in time. We appreciated it. The topic you choose is totally relevant for PPPM. It is a bit confused though the focus of your..."

Dear Carl,
thanks for having uploaded the abstract in time. We appreciated it. The topic you choose is totally relevant for PPPM. It is a bit confused though the focus of your wiki. A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article. Try to sharpen it in one direction. For example a tool or an applied example of it.
Review the suggested article structure in the Wiki assignment on CampusNet (or in the class handbook), and make sure you cover all the relevant aspects. You are free to deviate from it you think that makes more sense for your assignment.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:International Project Management

2016-09-12T11:25:16Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Camille. Interesting topic. I would recommend you to be more specific within a specific area. For example you can find out a tool that is used for Int. Proj. Management. ..."

Dear Camille.
Interesting topic. I would recommend you to be more specific within a specific area. For example you can find out a tool that is used for Int. Proj. Management. If you have some doubts we can discuss it together :)
Also giving an example would help to be more concrete.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:Risk management process

2016-09-12T11:21:23Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Bjarni, Nice topic. Useful for PPPM. Few english mistakes. Overall good job. If i were u I would insert an example of a case study or a company that you know / find info ..."

Dear Bjarni,
Nice topic. Useful for PPPM. Few english mistakes. Overall good job. If i were u I would insert an example of a case study or a company that you know / find info to make the topic more concrete.
Good job.
Jess

Talk:Myers-Briggs Type Indicator

2016-09-12T11:14:28Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Birthe, Nice topic. Remember to highlight WHY this tool is important in PPPM. Also giving examples can definitely help to be clear. Perfect that u already insert limitati..."

Dear Birthe,
Nice topic. Remember to highlight WHY this tool is important in PPPM. Also giving examples can definitely help to be clear. Perfect that u already insert limitations. A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Good english.
Jess

Talk:Fault Tree Analysis in Projects

2016-09-12T10:49:54Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Arvin, Super interesting topic. It totally makes sense for PPPM. If I were you I would also give an example to be more concrete. Try to find an example of a company or ca..."

Dear Arvin,
Super interesting topic. It totally makes sense for PPPM. If I were you I would also give an example to be more concrete. Try to find an example of a company or case study.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis. I can see you added the chapter limitations. Put there ur opinion.
Jess

Talk:Risk and Opportunities Management

2016-09-12T10:45:31Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Anika, interesting topic. Try to focus more on the tools and the steps of risk and opportunities management instead of focusing too much about the definition of risk and ..."

Dear Anika,
interesting topic. Try to focus more on the tools and the steps of risk and opportunities management instead of focusing too much about the definition of risk and opportunities.
English good :)
If i were you I would start with a brief intro defining what are risks and opportunities. Examples are welcome.
Then seven process steps description
Tool
Pros & Cons (limitations)

It's perfect that you already insert the chapter limitation. It is fundamental to be critical. seven process step. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:Portfolio Management using the BCG-Matrix

2016-09-12T10:40:47Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Alexander, well done! I can see you already wrote more than just the abstract. I like it. Perfect that you added citations and images. Good english. After the Key Assumpt..."

Dear Alexander,
well done! I can see you already wrote more than just the abstract. I like it. Perfect that you added citations and images. Good english. After the Key Assumptions and Core Elements of the Matrix I would go with the Classification of Businesses into four Portfolio Categories and later on with the Strategic Business Units (SBU) and Product Markets & Relative Market Share and Cash Generation & Market Growth and Cash Use.
A suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess

Talk:Understand best practices based on network mapping

2016-09-12T10:33:22Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Dear Alexander, the topic is relevant for APPPM. From your description I don't really get what are gonna be your "best practices". Try to be more specific in you full article ..."

Dear Alexander,
the topic is relevant for APPPM. From your description I don't really get what are gonna be your "best practices". Try to be more specific in you full article and go in depth regarding the definition of it.
A suggestion that I give to all the students is to be critical. Write your article, report you references and then explain pros and cons. This would help to reach a good grade.
Jess

Talk:Knowledge management in projects and organizations

2016-09-12T10:27:48Z

Jejenji: Created page with "Feedback Dear Aitor, the topic totally fits the criteria. It is a fundamental tool for APPPM. To make the topic more interesting perhaps you could give a short example. At t..."

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Dear Aitor,
the topic totally fits the criteria. It is a fundamental tool for APPPM. To make the topic more interesting perhaps you could give a short example.
At the end of you article I would recommend you to put some personal opinions like --> this is useful but it has those limitations. Be critical.
Excellent english. Good punctuation.
Good job

Jess

User:Stefan.schenk

2016-09-10T08:47:52Z